Reviews For Vacation
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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2022 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 6

A really interesting concept here, Lola is lucky to have a good friend.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2022 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 6

Really hoping Tiffany gets MUCH smaller...like an inch or less. Would also be awesome if Michelle found a growth serum at the store and grew to take over the island making all of them her pets!

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2022 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 6

Things are heating up now. I can't wait to see what happens next chapter with Tiffany and Michelle. 

(this kind of serves Tiffany right for her earlier attitude)

Nice work on this chapter :) 

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