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Reviewer: Greenanon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2022 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 5 The Desert and the Oasis

Interesting story, personally I get the vibe that Hinba's intentions are more... well maybe not noble, but at least more reasonable than they appear, looking forward to seeing how the relationship between the protagonists develops and hoping to see more of the world you've created. The story hook is definitely pretty good!



Author's Response:

Ok first off. You're the honest to god reason I even wrote this thing. The first conquest of earth trilogy (or arc? I'm not sure what you'd call them) had me in such a good mood for literally weeks after reading it. Thank you so much for taking the time to read it and review it. You have no idea how absolutely delighted that makes me. I won't spoil anything if you have yet to catch the rest.

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