[Report This]Date: May 19 2022 3:29 PM Title: Introducing: Planet Lily
I want more procedural world take over stories like this one. They're so perfectly up my alley. It's well-paced too, though personally I wouldn't have minded getting more of Lily herself, as well as more dialogue between her competitors and dissenters. That way we can get an outside perspective of how much this woman is truly starting to encompass everything. Pushback against monopolization, conspiracy theories about how everything seems to be falling into place around her rise, maybe a bit more about her board of directors and how she's accruing other companies under her personal umbrella. I'm also curious about what regular people think about all this happening, and how it's affecting their lives, though I suspect the followup story will get more into that. Either way, thanks for outdoing yourself!