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Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2022 2:12 AM Title: Peek behind the curtains/Back to the Grind

This is a great story.  I really appreciate how you use different shrunken sizes in your story.

I too have shrunken servants in some of my stories, though they are all male and all uniformed in French Maid attire. 

I like how Amanda and Lily use / abuse their tinies, that's pretty hot.

My only complaint is grammatical errors and the like.  For instance you just wrote "Jenny lifted her palm to her face" rather than "Amanda lifted..."; and "Larry took a deep breath, preparing himself to yell." then followed up with "'Now, Lenny.'"

Otherwise absolutely great story.

By the way, love shipping off tinies with drones and that Amanda kept a woman as her butt plug for an entire month.  That was hot.  Also like the toe rings and toe prisoners.



Author's Response:

Thank you!
Definitely dig the males dressed as French Maids. 

Yeah. I tend to write my stories and post in one action so my editing is very minimal. I usually do fixes as I reread after posting. Thanks for the catches!

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