[Report This]Date: March 24 2024 9:05 AM Title: Part 7: Swedish Pagans, Marching Ashore!
What a welcome return. Now I know so much of this is going to be determined by the commissioner, but I'd just love it you could find a way to get the Aussie afterlife involved for a smuggling trip 'down under'.
Author's Response:
I'll see about getting Sheila in there at some point lol.
[Report This]Date: March 20 2024 5:09 AM Title: Part 7: Swedish Pagans, Marching Ashore!
Wow, it had been so long since I read this story, I had to re-read the whole thing as I thought it was done. I really liked the way you brought the story back to life (pun intended) although I did find it a bit confusing that the humans could be continuously crushed and still be alive. Glad to see this story back again.
one typo:
liftin / lifting
Author's Response:
When they're in their "soul forms" and tiny they can still "die." I guess you might say that the only way for Amy and Aaron to actually get killed would be by another mortal while at full size.
Date: March 19 2024 2:36 AM Title: Part 7: Swedish Pagans, Marching Ashore!
I'm really glad to see this story continue. I like the chapter, though I'm not fond of vore. Also, do the various afterlifs compete for dead souls? If yes, why?
The petite Valkyrie let out a tiny belch as the mouthful of foot hit her stomach,
Is that supposed to be food?
“most supernatural stuff doesn’t like salt. Gabriella also gave me a holy hand grenade, but we’re not supposed to use it unless the Easter Bunny shows up
I love Monty Python, though as much as I like Monty Python and the Holy Grail, Life of Brian was my favorite.
a279;
Author's Response:
Afterlives gain power and influence from the people that enter them, but only if the people fit, if that makes sense, so Hell can't just get a bunch of good people to get more powerful, you might think of them as social clubs as well, like the Greek Gods probably haven't picked up nearly as many souls recently but they're very happy with the ones they do have.
also typo fixed
[Report This]Date: March 18 2024 7:10 PM Title: Part 7: Swedish Pagans, Marching Ashore!
Didn't expect to see this continue! Great stuff, time for divine hijinks!
Author's Response: These guys get wrapped up in too many cosmic entanglements