[Report This]Date: May 20 2022 1:48 AM Title: Part 2: Divine Intervention
Gotta say this chapter felt like an episode of Regular show (funniest) you even got the reaper as a biker. Ja!
I'll look foward to your next work.
Author's Response:
Yeah I love the reaper as a biker concept, pairs well with Blue Oyster Cult. The next part will have Morticia playing a more central role as the judge of the divine court.
[Report This]Date: May 18 2022 7:28 PM Title: Part 2: Divine Intervention
It's incredible how fast you're able to write your stories. How in the hell?
Good stuff as always. The humor's been great in this one. Looking forward to whatever hijinks occur at the Divine Court (I'm not even gonna begin to speculate who is going to show up).
Author's Response: Thanks, the divine court is going to be pretty wild, even for the host of heaven and the armies of hell.
[Report This]Date: May 18 2022 4:55 PM Title: Part 2: Divine Intervention
Raps? @YoHomeboyRaps?
Author's Response: That's the one yeah, he draws a lot of giantess angels which is why the ones in this story like him.
[Report This]Date: May 17 2022 7:55 PM Title: Part 2: Divine Intervention
You know there could be some kind of sharing deal, he stays in heaven, but gets to visit hell or let Cydea visit. Or thanks to something like quantum entanglement and superposition, et him be in both simultaneously.
Besides also highlighting that the auto-reap system needs tweaking or fixing. That or maybe have two or more of them running so that several have to be in agreement to make it go thought, simple enough error correction.
Plus Arron could try out with Gabriella for a bit, let him also know what heaven is like, transfer doesn’t have to happen all at once.
Otherwise, good chapter!
Author's Response:
Angels tend to be pretty absolutist and Heaven and Hell aren't on the best of terms, still they might find some common ground before the end.
Date: May 17 2022 12:18 PM Title: Part 2: Divine Intervention
Very funny chapter, usually don’t get a laugh or two in these stories but this was a pleasant surprise. Good job.
Author's Response: Thanks, this one is definitely a comedic tale, a divine comedy if you will.
Date: May 17 2022 10:52 AM Title: Part 2: Divine Intervention
Other beings might show up claiming they deserve a piece of Aaron's soul? This getting more interesting.
Author's Response:
Yep, everyone from Hades to Heck got the message that he was up for grabs. Obviously some of those claims are stronger than others.