[Report This]Date: September 29 2023 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 (Crumbly cookie)
This story keeps getting better and better, love the shots between perspectives and the perils of this micro/ tiny people, the whole environment for them is an utter hazard, great work, hopefully one or a few drop down her body and into panties or bra or something??? hint
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks for your review, I'm glad that you really like this story, its one of my favorites, and yes, there is definitely some panty action with some of the shrinkees dropping down there...
Date: August 07 2023 6:57 PM Title: Part 5
C Definitely C. *nods assertedly*
Author's Response:
cool, thanks for the vote
Date: August 03 2023 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 1 (Crumbly cookie)
Loved how you captured the sense of scale and terror that comes with it. I’d love to see more from this, specifically some butt action (not just crush, maybe some tinies find themselves slipping into the back of a thong). Lots of potential especially since Michelle has been captured
Author's Response:
hi there, thanks for your feedback, really appreciate that, glad you like the story and how I have tried to depict the scale and how the micro/ tinies feel about all of this. Later in the story there is definitely some panty action, check it out
[Report This]Date: August 02 2023 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 1 (Crumbly cookie)
Realy nice story would love to see them wake up as fat since they are being punished for treating her badly.
Author's Response:
thanks for your feedback, really appreciate that, glad you like the story. I think they are getting punished quite badly...