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Reviewer: Fatal Fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2022 6:48 PM Title: Act One

Been reading you for a while zude and I need to say, this was a good one. I don't totally love disposal but you killed it with the misery for poor josh

Author's Response:

It's always really lovely to hear somebody enjoyed a story from me regardless of their preferences! Means I did something really right! ^_^

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2022 2:03 AM Title: Act Three

Very nice yet sad ending for Josh.  Good story.

Author's Response:

Thanks a bunch! Glad you enjoyed it c:

Reviewer: Digestion Lover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2022 8:10 PM Title: Act One

great great great start! its so rare to see food transform!!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I believe that's why a big part of why it was commissioned! And I'm happy to fill the world with more!

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 03 2022 2:09 AM Title: Act One

Shouldn't part of Josh still be in Brittany's hand as the remaining part of the sandwich? 

Very curious as to what happens now that the timer went off.  Will part of Josh be in Brittany's hand, parts as crumbs on the counter, and part in Brit's stomach?  Or will Josh be brought back unscathed sitting at the table?

Quite the cliff hanger. 

Author's Response:

Nope! The timer went off, so his consciousness was ripped away from the sandwich entirely.

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