[Report This]Date: May 31 2023 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 7
Superwomen are awesome. Size changing is awesome. Together they're incredible. The supreme power of the superwoman made even more extreme by the size difference. I also like these types of "corruption" or "descent into evil" stories, especially when the heroine is technically not doing it herself. It seems that glowing rock from the first chapter had a little side effect, turning the super heroine into a super villain. And she's still getting stronger!
I guess I like the betrayal aspect of it, like "she's supposed to be a hero! Why is she doing this?" Or something like that. The fact that everyone knew she was super when she was good and now realizing that there's nothing they can actually do to stop her now that she's bad is great. I've read a comic "The Amazing Eighth Wonder" that did this too.
I wonder if you will have Violet eventually be cured/come to her senses and realize what she's done? Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Hey, sorry for the late reply and thanks for the extensive review, Lightwing!
I have already written more chapters on my patreon page. And your review makes me realize that I failed to give enough attention to the concepts you're emphasizing. Violet becomes definitely more evil and destructive, but I could have done more with her character development revolving around the rock that made her evil.
Oh well. Good chance that I will write a similar story in the future one day.Thus, granting myself a second chance.
And a comic like that sounds great!
[Report This]Date: December 10 2022 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 5
The more absolute unchecked power, the better.
Author's Response:
Violet is only warming up here, son!
[Report This]Date: December 08 2022 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
> Violet becomes evil
> Immediately wants to help the jews
what did Glaazius mean by this?
Author's Response:
Ha! I knew I should have written a warning when posting a chapter that revolves around a sensitive matter.
Let me say this right away. This chapter is by no means some hidden statement I’m trying to make. Its purely meant for fun. I hate war and I hate choosing sides even more. I rather see us living in a conflict-free world.
But why specifically the Jews? I hear you thinking. Simple, because I wanted to write something in a realistic setting. And the conflict between the Jews and the Palestines were the first one that popped up in my head. Letting Violet choosing sides with the Jews is pure coincidence. I might as well have written about the conflict between the Hutsie’s and the tutsi’s, or the imperialistic China and the people of Taiwan and Tibet for all that matter.
In this chapter, Violet is not yet at the zenith of her evilness. She gradually floats from a being a beloved superheroine who only lives to keep people safe to a point (where she is now) that she finds she has the right to mingle in worldly affairs and have an opinion about it.
So again. This chapter is not meant to push some political statement in my reader’s face! Its just meant for fun.
Date: November 09 2022 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Will Violet calm down her anger if some fan of her comes straight to her and offers to tickle her foot?
Author's Response:
I wouldn't bet my money on it
Date: October 04 2022 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
To be asked by a cute girl to tickle her soft, pretty foot? I would answer any time of the day.
Author's Response:
And Violet is a very cute girl with very soft feet ;)
Date: May 09 2022 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
I’m loving the story so far. It combines my two favorite kinks: superwomen and size shifting.
I love how Violet seems to enjoy her incredible power and hope to see more of her smug side. I would love to see her bragging about how much better her life is.
Author's Response:
Those are my kinks too!
Glad you liked it! We will definitely see more of Violet's snarky attitude in the upcoming chapters.
Date: March 23 2022 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very, Very Great Story! Can't wait to read more of this.
Obviously something happened with that stone with a green hue Flemsy threw to Violet; perhaps the transformation you mentioned in your story description.
Would definitely like to hear more about the "appealing young cadet", "blonde girl", "who stuffed him {Flemsy} in the back pocket of her tight ass". She sounds like one sexy as hell female cop.
Seems Chief Callaway is a corrupt cop, or am I reading too much into his reaction of Flemsy taking a shot at him?
Can't wait to read more. Exceptionally well done.
Author's Response:
Hey thx for the kind words! There will definitely be more.
And yes, the stone is the thing that will trigger certain changes in Violet.
Haha, the appealing young cadet is only a bit player in this story I'm afraid.
Chief Callaway is not corrupt. It was implied that he was about to get inside there to negotiate with Flemsy right before Violet's arrival. Perhaps Flemsy got nervous when he saw Violet entering the scene. Or perhaps he's just a disloyal dog who cannot be trusted on his word. That's for the reader to decide, I guess.
But I like it when readers start analyzing my stories.
Thx for reading my story and leaving a review ;)
Date: March 21 2022 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
so it will be a slow transformation from good to evil? really like stories like this
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Author's Response:
thx for liking it!
And yes, Violet will gradually become more evil over the course of the upcoming chapters