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Date: March 16 2022 2:03 PM Title: Immortal: Untouchable

"He was standing atop the now mountainous breast of the woman he had been stepping on earlier."

"You’ve realized it now, haven’t you? Why immortals seem to disappear whenever I’m hired?”

Rumble." - This Juxtaposition made me think she would eat (and digest to get past his Invulnerability, I think a constant acid bath would eventually kill him, or at least wear his body and psyche down to a state that can hardly be called "alive" anymore) him.

This story makes me a little sad, albeit I quite like it.Especially the Chapter End Note. Because it would only need some minor changes to fit into "Appraise and Change", which I still hope against hope that it eventually will get another chapter. >.>
It still is an enjoyable standalone offer though. Nice idea, that a very short woman of all people has (maybe due to that as your mind and soul most likely greatly influence your magic capabilities) an insane aptitude in usage of Mini Magic and uses is to "cut arrogant immortals down to size". Quite literally.

Author's Response:

It'd be nice to finish another one of the Appraise and Change chapters I started. Hopefully I can when I find the time since one of those chapters is at least halfway done. Digestion to wear away immortality is an interesting idea. Maybe I'd use it for a different immortal type.