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Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 09 2022 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting concept.  I really like the predator / prey relationship.  Also like that the woman was swallowed whole and alive rather than chewed into bits {although I imagine that will happen to a few of the "mice"}

All in all very well written.  Easy to read and it flows quite nicely.

Looking forward to more chapters.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I enjoyed reading your feedback and glad that you enjoyed this chapter! I'm planning on working on Cats and Mice Chapter 2 Part 2 up to Easter...

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