Date: April 07 2022 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is excellent! You're an incredible writer. I'm not a fan of male giants or couples, but I read Summer Holiday and was blown away by your writing ability. You really know how to effectuate cruelty and erotic nihilism in your characters. The part where Marlene crushes her hometown turned me on so much.
When I saw you had a story that was solely about a giga woman, I got so excited. And you do a really good job of taking her through the journey of being unaware, then concerned, then evil. Love the character transformation. Hope there will be more to come soon?
Date: March 14 2022 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
I very much enjoyed this. Unique setting, unique premise with good execution. Could use more descriptions of what she's doing to make the action last longer. Other than that seriously liked the world and setup. My favorite part was getting to see the Mykonians perspective near the end. Barefeet also always a plus. Will be watching for more stories from you.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your feedback. It's harder than I thought to come up with varied descriptions without becoming too repetitive. I will keep your advice in mind.