Date: September 22 2022 7:50 PM Title: Prologue
Been following this story for a while, glad to see it's finished! I loved pretty much every chapter. The scenarios were great, the scaling was great, and most importantly your writing was great as well. I really enjoyed reading it and you gave me some ideas as well lol. Hope to see what comes next from you, and hoping it's some more unaware!
Date: September 22 2022 4:33 PM Title: Sunday in the basement
Would you consider an epilogue, I’d be curious how the family would react if they knew their actions towards Marie although she’ll likely pretend to be angry for their destruction of the model city.
Date: August 22 2022 2:48 PM Title: Saturday around the house
Loving this story so far.
Not a fan of the male aspects but that's fine.
However, there has been a lot of teasing with the cat and also the mention of having to be out on the open to grow back or else be delayed.
I'm a bit on the sadistic side of shrinking stories, such as, they usually don't survive.
Honestly, the only way I see this ending is during a countdown to the growth kicking in, she's scooped up into her cats maw, stopping her growth before being swallowed whole.
I really hope you have somewhat of a similar mindset or at the least, some actual interaction with the cat.
Looking forward to the next (and last?) Chapter.
Date: July 28 2022 12:01 PM Title: Saturday around the house
hello I love your story, I only hope for two things, that she gets trapped in her mother's vagina and that the protagonist survives at the end of the story please, I don't want the story to end with her death please
Date: June 09 2022 6:16 PM Title: Prologue
Apart from the male giant chapters (simply because that's not my thing) this story is great! Fun concept!
Thanks, though Iím guessing a lot of my stuff wonít be for you in that case. Appreciate it though!
Date: June 08 2022 12:04 PM Title: Friday on the floor
Man, every chapter continues to impress and delight! Carrie got a bit of a power fantasy going on after her visit to Marie's city and Vic unawarely fufilling one of her ideas was great! I think my favorite sequence was with Marie getting knocked around by Vic slapping Carrie's cheeks. Very fun and sexy idea there!
Very intersted in seeing how this story continues and ends. Please keep up the fantastic work with not only this, but all your stories!
Thank you! Glad you liked it! Still two more chapters to come as well!
Date: May 24 2022 1:28 AM Title: Prologue
I have to give major props to you for this story- the premise might just be perfect. You combine all the intimate focus of an individual tiny, plus city destruction, plus unaware? That's one hell of a recipe right there. This story has been fantastic so far like all your other work has been, and I can't wait to see what comes next. Fingers crossed for some more foot action!
Thank you very much, glad to hear youíre enjoying it! Thatís quite a compliment! And yes, Iím planning on some foot action in the next chapter.
Date: May 09 2022 4:28 PM Title: Tuesday with Mom
Loved when Carrie placed her feet on the table.
Always love woman carelessly resting their feet in front of a micro city. So much power in so mudane gestures.
Also great POV from Marie!!
Date: April 20 2022 10:42 PM Title: Prologue
Oh dear, poor girl better hope the next time someone goes to clean her room they aren't feeling gassy or she'll be fumigated! Great stuff as usual, you really manage to make a scenario palpably humiliating.
Thank you so much!
Date: April 20 2022 10:23 PM Title: Prologue
Love the smut in the latest chapter, maybe the parents can have some fun in the city together in the coming chapters. Looking forward to more
Thank you! Not giving too much away but you might not be disappointedÖ.
Date: April 20 2022 7:07 PM Title: Prologue
Awesome premise and loving it so far, been a fan of most of your stories and especially happy to see the action in Chapter 4! Keep it up!
Thank you very much! Hope you enjoy where this story eventually goes!
Date: April 18 2022 11:50 PM Title: Prologue
One of the favorite new stories on this website! I seriously can't wait to see what is in store! Keep up the good work!
Thank you so much, that means a lot! Hopefully you wonít have to wait much longer!
Date: April 13 2022 1:19 PM Title: Tuesday with Mom
Okay, maybe it’s just me but… what if the family actually somehow knew she was shrunk and decided to mess with her as a result. I had a weird feeling from the mom when she and the dad sent different pictures coincidentally. If that were the case I’d imagine Marie would likely shrink them.
I’m not recommending this as an idea but I just had a gut feeling.
Thanks for the review! I can see how the story kinda teases that but Iím treating it as a coincidence. My plan is to have the family unaware in this story!