[Report This]Date: December 26 2022 8:53 AM Title: All About Alice
Great chapter man! Really good job on Alice's characterization and some of the... circumstances. I love uncaring torment and you did it well. It may be your first foray into ass/gas/pussy stuff 'publicly' but I couldn't tell reading it, I love the torment of the guy getting crusty up front almost being tempted to switch out with the one in the back, only to prove why he's got it better... The torment of the second guy was done even better, shoving him into it as the torture continues and even using his GF against him to force him into providing the best service was great. Excellent way to end the chapter, I wonder if they can actually sniff themselves into a coma... and when they can't, what punishment they'll have to watch, haha. Wouldn't mind finding out, but then, sometimes imagination is more horrifying than the truth... B^)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I've gotta be honest, as focused as I am on trying to write developed and realistic characters, sometimes it is fun to just let loose and write someone as plainly cruel and sadistic as Alice is haha. And I suppose that's a good thing that you couldn't tell I'm not used to publicly writing those things, though I have done more of those fetishes since this.
Yeah, I'd be lying if I said I wasn't at least a bit proud of that whole scenario, and it definitely came together better than expected. And if it's possible for them to inhale their way into a coma, then Alice'd definitely be the one to cause it. Plus, perhaps that'd be more merciful than remaining conscious to see what plans a blonde sadist like her has for them next...