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Reviewer: smotherslave101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2022 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love the whole storyu just read the 3 chapters really good. The pace is nice and eveything is well written absolutely loving it cannot wait for chapter 4.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words.  I appreciate it.   -Arcovion.


Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 25 2022 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

The story concept is great.


however; I don’t know if it’s this site that’s causing it tho but there seems to be a few issues with formatting on your piece. E.g dialogue not being in seperate paragraphs. 

Other then that it’s a good start.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.  I appreciate it.  I am glad you think the story concept is great.  The formatting issues are my fault !

-Arcovion.

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