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Reviewer: ExTha Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2007 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was frickin' incredible. Great lead-in that wasn't too long... great body of the story, and an awesome, fun ending. 5 stars. =P

Reviewer: ELITE Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2006 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

It was ok needs a little work though

Reviewer: someguy1900 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2006 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

nice story, i remember reading this before.

Reviewer: Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 20 2006 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good story. I enjoyed it.

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