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Reviewer: D72 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 13 2022 11:03 PM Title: All's well

While I definitely enjoy seeing transphobia and bigotry being called out for what it is, it'd be nice if the slurs (i.e., tr***y, & sh****e) used to describe Vanessa in various scenes by the AUTHOR could be removed.

I'm not saying I enjoy reading slurs in the context of a transphobic character either, just that the context is very much different.

Author's Response:

Hey there, so sorry about my poor choice of words, throughout some of the chapters. That was not intentional to offend anyone. I took the liberty to taking as much of that out of the story as I could, which I hope will increase people's enjoyment of the story going forward. As you said, context is key, so I'mma make sure this story tells the right narrative.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22 2022 2:00 AM Title: Separation Anxiety

Welp, Janet is a bitch 

And I can't wait to see what Vanessa does to her come next chapter XD

Also nice work with her knocking out that letcherous asshole. 




Author's Response:

good to know you're enjoying the story

Reviewer: Raven_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18 2022 1:42 PM Title: And the adventure continues

Hi, i like the story and how you are managing the characters, just a little comment, words like tranny and shemale are considered to be slurs/despective terms within trans communities

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 16 2022 6:10 AM Title: The Zoni sees red

Ok damn, I can't wait to see Vanessa and Janet interacting in the next chapter. 

Also nice working in an old school friend of Devin's. Would be cool to hear more about their past.

XD I love Vanessa's reaction to Janet freaking out. 

Reviewer: Catgirl_Warcrimes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2022 6:02 PM Title: Making a good impression

Love the story so far! Trans Rights! 🏳a039;r05;🌈d84;a039;

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2022 8:04 AM Title: Making a good impression

Just a little tip.

There is a Trans tag, for tagging stories with Transgender characters.

The Futanari tag is a whole seperate tag that's for fantasy/sci-fi, etc. Not Transgender characters. 

So I would probably just swap tags for better clarification. 

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