Date: February 07 2023 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 10: Wedding Day
You know, I can see the hesitancy to end this crystal clearly. Definitely grew fond of these characters! And hopefully maybe we can see some side stories of them in the future! Thanks for the story mate!
Author's Response:
It was a painful goodbye, like I said it was my first longer story and I'm not opposed to revisiting them someday, but I also really wanted to give them a happy ending.
[Report This]Date: November 07 2022 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 10: Wedding Day
I really enjoy a lot about this story, especially the way the pheromones work so hard on him. Seems absolutely natural for someone confronted with a woman so many times larger. I love the consensual but not quite planned way their relationship evolved. Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thanks! There's a pheromone effect going on in my new story Reunion as well, though it's a far darker tale than this one. Overall this was a pretty sweet little slice of life story and I'm happy with how it turned out.
[Report This]Date: August 28 2022 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 10: Wedding Day
Luckily for me I just discovered this story for the first time yesterday and got to binge the whole thing. I liked it a lot. Consenting relationships are always more my thing in these stories. I found this story hit a good balance with lots of dom stuff in what was ultimately a loving relationship.
I just had to tell you, when you put down the lyrics of the song during the wedding, I went and looked it up and started playing it. The song was long enough that it came to an end like 10 seconds after I finished the story. Don’t know if you intended that, but it was very nice hearing the song fade out as I read of the two of them flying above the clouds. Very good conclusion vibes.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it enough to read the whole thing in a day haha. While this one is a more relaxed tale than a lot of mine I'm generally into the mutually consenting relationship for this genre, while some of my stories start with the protagonists on rockier footing than this one it's generally where I like them to end, and I like an uplifting vibe for the finale.
The song played at the wedding is an odd choice since it's a somewhat sad one in the context of the anime it's from, but at the same time it's a good slow song with a sense of finality to it and it's the kind of thing Kacey would listen to. I didn't time it with story but that's a nice happy accident if it ended at the same time you finished it.
[Report This]Date: August 24 2022 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 10: Wedding Day
Amazing conclusion, though I do admit there were some scenes that felt a little rushed. That aside, it did really feel like everything tied in well and it really felt like a good ending. Great stuff all around.
Author's Response:
Thanks, it's been a long time coming at this point lol, it's nice to send these two off into the sunset.
[Report This]Date: August 23 2022 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 10: Wedding Day
Can't believe this story is finally complete. Feels like only last year we were waiting for new updates. Couldn't have asked for a better ending for these two. Really liked this finale and can't wait to see what else you have in store.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I was feeling sentimental for these two over the weekend and wanted to come back around and finish this one up, like I said I always had a wedding ending in mind I've just been putting off writing it. As for what's next I'm probably going to roll back on over to Champion of the Goddess, I actually almost had a chapter ready for that when I switched gears.