Date: February 27 2022 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 6: One More Day
Chapter 6 was a top-tier entry. Jake is by far, my favorite tiny male character to have graced this website, and we get to see him be a bigger man for once this chapter. Kacey's stallion comment was gold-pressed latinum.
You've also established a very good dynamic between Ash and Andy. That was one relationship I was a bit iffy on, but seeing Ash's "play" for lack of better terms, and Andy's enthusiastic reciprocation, was a very fun segment. Liked that classic Cheerio's callback to "Honey, I shrunk the kids." At least, I assume that's what that scene was referencing. Lot's of tiny guys and gals end up in these cereal situations. It's a crisis I tell ya!
Of course, we get to see Kacey be the bigger woman, resisting the temptation to just string Jake along and take him back by force. I suppose Love is the strongest Force of all. Not as strong as the High Ground, though.
Author's Response: You can consider it a Honey I shrunk the Kids reference, and yeah Andy has come around to enjoying Ash's games now that he knows her a bit and is sure they are in fact just games. Kacey and Jake are very much in love, what I wanted to show was that their feelings would endure even if the power dynamic between them changed.
[Report This]Date: February 25 2022 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 6: One More Day
A very extensive chapter, it’s long but never once felt lacklustre. Full of actions with some development or characterisation for the giantess figures in how they respect trust and willingness to engage in actions. For a gentle story that’s always great to see; as well as with a balance of giantess stuff with story.
Jake also gets some characterisation here with what he would do when he would be big, and it’s better the. What you would expect. Man is a true trooper and it’s great seeing how he gets along with Kacey.
This overall was probably the best chapter so far, had a little bit of everything. Hope to see more.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I had hoped to flesh out the tiny characters a bit, looks like it went well.
[Report This]Date: February 25 2022 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 6: One More Day
That was awesome man. I don't know what to emphasize other than I loved it. This concept was executed perfectly. I hope that maybe you do it again one day for another big event for the two, or maybe even Andy and Ash. Jake's priorities for the day showed just how awesome he is as a person.
Author's Response:
I don't want full size days to happen often for the characters or they lose some of the magic, but I can't rule anything out. Andy and Ash would probably spend a full size day mostly with each other. As far as Jake's priorities yeah, if you've got one day you've got to make the most of it. Kacey still has some confidence issues, Jake on the other hand has definitely come around to the realization that he should have always been with Kacey, and he'd still want to be with her even if he was normal again.
[Report This]Date: February 25 2022 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 6: One More Day
Pretty cool idea. Not something you really see in size stories. I especially like the scaled up shrinkie instead of a return to normal. The shrinking giving victims superhuman abilities is something I like from your various stories. Nice little bit of cosmic balancing.
Author's Response:
I always like to make shrinking victims tougher, sometimes with a few other powers. It makes things easier on the characters emotionally, and I like to open up more interaction possibilities.