[Report This]Date: February 13 2022 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 4: Meeting new people
Well, I caught up and I have to say that I am loving this story. The slice of life is amazing. That Jake has a job and can still do things is great.
I'm not normally into micro interactions that small, but you sold it in chapter 2. I still prefer the regular 3 inch stuff though.
I think it's great seeing the interactions between Kacey and Jake. I love the building of her musk to toy with him and how she uses her old clothes as projectiles for him. The way that Jake has learned how to resist her a little bit is amazing. I really like that no matter what she's still concerned about him if she feels he actually gets into any pain. It's important to show that the connection is genuine between the two. Without that connection remaining the relationship between a normal and a tiny loses its spark in my eyes.
It would be interesting if she started using more of his durability and kept him in her sock while walking around, maybe even exercising with Ash at the same time. While of course being worried about Jake at first.
I think the durability should extend to being eaten, even if you don't cover it in this story it would be nice to add an extra layer of comfort to Jake and Andy, but it is your story.
Ash and Andy is very intriguing. Despite Ash's very playful nature she still wants to take care of him properly. She can certainly get ahead of herself sometimes but, she's a great character.
And Kacey working at the office is very cool. Hopefully Ms. Black will come around a little bit.
Author's Response:
Kacey definitely cares for Jake, it's one of the things I won't compromise on. Everything between the two is for their own enjoyment, if that makes sense.
As for being eaten, yeah they could totally survive that. I'm not 100% on a vore scene, but I do like my tinies borderline invincible.
[Report This]Date: February 12 2022 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 4: Meeting new people
Ms. Black obviously doesn't approve of how Kacey lives her life, but knows that they do love each other. I'm sure this is an attempt at changing how she lives her life a bit, force some good habits (like basic hygiene).
[Report This]Date: February 11 2022 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 4: Meeting new people
I love this story! The idea of her odors affecting him is pretty awesome and I love how the story has been progressing. I can't wait to see more interactions between Andy and Jake.