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Reviewer: MicroHuggles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2023 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

Hey, just noticed the updated text on your story, great work. I was the one that starred both of your stories, you're an excellent writer.
Massive fan of many of your works, especially this one and The Elf is Innocent!.

Would love to see more from you covering more niche topics, might be fun to have a chat in the future.

-MicroHuggles

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks a million! Yeah I have some niche interests lol. Anyways I'm glad you liked this one and One Year Lease, it was very flattering to see them featured! I'm usually down to chat about stories or whatever, you can DM me if you want on discord, greenanon#1333

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2022 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

Want to write story in this world setting  and I wanted to make sure I didn't forget any  shrinky buffs:

1. Durability.

2. Fast regeneration. Same goes for stamina(sexual to).

3. You can go without air for hours.

4. Smell of a person you like makes you horny for her (pheromone stuff)

5.Their strength and physical characteristics is slightly higher than they should be if you use cube law, but not by much.

6. Size shift happens once in a while.



Author's Response:

The only one I can think of that you missed is that bugs and animals tend to avoid them, which if you're small is a plus lol.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2022 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

Need to ask world building question:


How much of world's population has shrunk here?

I'm sorry if it was mentioned and i skipped it.



Author's Response: 2%, I think it is mentioned in the first chapter right after Jake shrinks.

Reviewer: pengasman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2022 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

This one really ticked all my boxes and made me smile :)) I really appreciate this story! 



Author's Response:

Glad to hear it, I like my stories to have a feel good vibe at the end of them.

Reviewer: imaybegae Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2022 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

This story is so enchanting, it makes me wonder if it has showered within the past week or two. 



Author's Response: I'd say it was good clean fun, but it was only two out of three of those.

Reviewer: Kessler Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2022 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

With the five days a month upgrade would that mean they could dodge unusual size shifts? Just going, oh, that's a bit much I'll do this another time when I'm not going to be flea size.

Great story glad to see it find a happy ending.



Author's Response: Yeah I think the next version of the meter will probably let them dodge the crazy size shifts if they wanted, at the same time I guess they're still on the table for those crazy enough to want them lol. Glad you liked the ending.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2022 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

How tall is Kacey?

From all that was mentioned I only remember Jake being 6' and Ash being 2" taller than Andy. It's often mentioned she is petite but I don't remember if there was exact height mentioned.



Author's Response: I don't remember if I ever gave her an exact height but I always imagined her somewhere around 5' 3" or thereabouts, she's supposed to be fairly petite like you said.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2022 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

I know something about world and character building because that what I usually pay attention to but it's hard to write individual interactions. How did you learn to write such good interactions? A lot of reading or something else?



Author's Response:

I read a lot and I write a lot, I don't really have any special tips other than trying to picture your scene and imagine the characters as people you know, having a conversation or doing whatever. I'd recommend just practicing it, reading it, and asking if the scene in your head made it to the page, then work from there. There are probably better writing guides online than me lol, I'd encourage you to simply give it a shot and see if it's something you want to pursue.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2022 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

Names:

Cure Inventor: Tatsuya(175)

Shinobi: Mei(145)

Genius normal couple: Haruto and Yui(188 and 154)( they are actually working on biological way to change races( human to tiny or tiny to human). Serious task, they may finish it in epilogue. They can make temporary transformation tho some time in the story. Motivation for  Yuiis her size complex and her lover is too big. She wants to switch roles at least once. Haruto sees Tatsuya's breakthrough and thinks shrinking let's him discover world of new possibilities so it's his motivation for the project.

Evil woman - Kimiko(170)


Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2022 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

Also cool idea to make a secret tiny organisation that figured out how to make  a shrinking band(that can shrink with you, maybe its made from your own blood or something). It's good for spying and the organization can be counter to "human" extremist organizations. It actually starts to sound like a plot for another story in the same setting.



Author's Response:

Not sure if I'll revisit this setting when it's done, but I imagine that shrinking would be great for espionage.

Reviewer: MysticCrunk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2022 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

This is a lengthy chapter, but it never lacked in quality. Giantess characters' trust and readiness to take part in action are developed or characterized here, with a focus on their activities. To witness a peaceful plot, as well as a good mix of giantess items and story.

It's also nice that Jake gets some character development here with what he would do when he grows up. This is exactly what you'd anticipate. I love how well he gets along with Kacey; he's a real soldier.

A lot of different things happened in this chapter that made it one of the greatest thus far. Wish there were more.



Author's Response:

Thanks, this one of my first forays into longer stories, and I think it's a bit shaky in parts and I think that more shorter chapters would have benefited it. Still I think it's a good slice of life plot and the characters care a lot about each other which is nice.

Reviewer: Octosquid11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2022 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

Very fun chapter. Keep up the good work, GreenAnon!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I often find myself coming back to this setting and these characters after more plot heavy stories. The slice of life stuff is a nice breather.

Reviewer: GeorgeRake Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 13 2022 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

So adorable. Love it.

Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 11 2022 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

Absolutely amazing story, the loving balance of her power as his new guardian while still being caring towards the Male protag is wonderful. 


I would love to see more of his characterisation expressed however. 
Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: smellanon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2022 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

Hey greenanon! Nice to see you joining us here from the boards. You know I love your stories and this one especially. Cant wait to see the smellier depths this story goes as they go through their daily lives. Keep up the great work! 

Reviewer: Jsmith20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2022 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

Fantastic start you have here. I've only read the first chapter so far, I'll get to the others later. But I want to tell you that you have something awesome in your hands. Instantly I was connected to these characters and I can't wait to read more when I have the time. I like all of the world-building choices you made here. I hope the durability aspect gets explored more. So many things were excellent in the first chapter alone. My favorite part was him being in the sock. I love that Kacey still checked with him first and got his consent(which is always crucial, especially in a size-relationship like this).  I also hope that there are tiny electronics developed to be used. 

I can't wait to see the relationship between these two blossom. The "Be my girlfriend." was perfect.

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