Reviewer: breastclimber Signed [Report This]
Date: October 02 2023 10:16 PM Title: A Diplomatic Mission Pt 1: A Misadventure

I really loved the solution at the end with the big scrying circle.   I noticed this story is marked as Complete:No, but you have an epilogue and everything.   Is that just an oversight?  It looks complete to me.

Author's Response:

You can consider it complete, I don't have any plans to do more adventures with this group right now. This was actually my first fantasy story and early in my longer story writing efforts, so I deliberately went with a sort of episodic approach so while it ends it can still pick up again, if that makes sense.

Reviewer: Nightwatch Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2022 3:54 AM Title: A Diplomatic Mission Pt 1: A Misadventure

Loving  this story so far it just like welcome to hell but fantasy and with different kind of monsters kind of wondering what came next though, also I have way mircalla story within the cast could go , one they found a cure for vampirism turning human again which would kind of be lame choice or the second opinion is turning her into a day walker like a  vampire who doesn't need blood to survive sunlight, forget what the mythical for a day walker is but they are vampires who don't need to drink blood to survive and only need blood for enjoyment, these are just two ways that I can think of for mircalla for your story.

Author's Response:

I don't think Mircalla will ever become human again, if the rest of the group ever trusts her enough she might be given some kind of magical enhancement to walk in the sun, but until then she's probably Gareth's "prisoner." It's not like it's hard to feed her at her current size!

Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2022 5:06 AM Title: A Diplomatic Mission Pt 1: A Misadventure

Wow, this might be my 2nd fav story from you. Really hoping more gets added to it soon. 

Reviewer: G Man Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22 2022 12:10 PM Title: A Diplomatic Mission Pt 1: A Misadventure

Out the Three Stories of yours I've read,This one is my Favorite!! Not only is it a Funny and sexy rom-com but you did a great job spicing up the story with a little bit of politics & great character work! My favorite wife is Severa the Arachne bc of her more playful & tomboyish charm. She's both caring, very intelligent,and doesn't want to be a monster like others thinks she is despite being probably the most powerful character in the seriesd84;🥰 I hope you decide to add some OVA chapters like in your Supervillian story,especially with more Severa🥰🥰🥰

Author's Response:

I keep meaning to come back to this one but I keep getting distracted. There is certainly room in the world for more stories.

Reviewer: BlueDream Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2022 2:31 AM Title: A Diplomatic Mission Pt 1: A Misadventure

I love it!!! Gonna check out your other stuff. This is some excellent writing, and just so damn entertaining.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm uploading the stories I've written for 4chan's gentle thread and I thought people here would like them.