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Reviewer: Gokuto Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2022 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

Seems good. Maybe make a continuation where after this dream, where he expressly makes it so only he can change it. Because in this kind of story, this always happens where it spins out of the creator’s control and at this point its kind of overdone. So maybe make it to where he shapes people for his own fetishes without anybody acting any different and just treating every change as reality. 



Author's Response:

You're absolutely correct that these kind of things get out of hand quick, so that's not a bad idea, thanks! But I will also tell you right now that this wasn't a dream ;)

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