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Reviewer: Simpson3k Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2022 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 12: A New Succubus Friend Created

I already hate Madi. She illegally entered private property, invaded peoples private space and the only person who argued against wiping her mind of the incident she pushes away with that girl night.


I really hope she is put back in her place by the queen at some point even below the future king.



Author's Response: I can agree that Madi did something very illegal by going into someone else’s home. Madi’s behavior is tied to some history that she has that will pop up later. She has not had a good life and not the best influence from her brothers. She is very defensive while having a temper. Her decisions are not always the smartest but she cares for those who are her friends. She is going to be a good friend of Sarah. She was breaking Sarah out her shy self to be more open. Madi will have to face some consequences in future tied to her succubus side.

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2022 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 12: A New Succubus Friend Created

Interesting concept. Being able to create more succubus could make intriguing interactions and situations later on. Especially if Dwayne gets more than one girl.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Dwayne is only going to get one girl. He can be teased with other girls for things.

Reviewer: unknown1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2022 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 9: First day as a succubus

I love this story so far, would it be possible to put the writing.com version in the description or put your writing profile in your profile here?



Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I have put the interactive in the description and put my writing profile in my bio.

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