Reviewer: breastclimber Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2023 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 1: Simple Job

Is this story going to be continued?   I like the plot.  However the actual gaming parts not as much.

Author's Response: Yes. The story will be continuing. I am running into the issue that my draft is close to the edited version of the story. It will take a little longer for chapters to come out with writing and editing. I am glad that you like the plot. The gaming is to give more depth to the characters, have some things that everyone has in common. It also shows that they are not aware always of what is going on around them. They want to just be a group of friends but there are things outside that will challenge that.

Reviewer: theharper Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2023 6:06 AM Title: Heroes, Succubus, and the Beach ch 10.

Keep going. The back story is a nice filler.

Tell next time. Have a good day.

Author's Response: Thank you very much

Reviewer: theharper Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2023 9:21 PM Title: Heroes, Succubus, and the Beach ch. 9

Not bad. I'm not a big fan of shrinking but you did this quite well. Can't wait to see what comes next.

Author's Response: Thank you. There will be more shrinking but nothing permanent. Shrinking in the universe by succubus is not permanent. The universe abhors mass transfer so it is temporary, lasting about an hour.

Reviewer: theharper Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2023 11:20 AM Title: Heroes, Succubus, and the Beach Ch:7

There's a twist I wasn't expecting. Doing a good job keep it up.

Author's Response: I think there was some duplications on the reviews

Reviewer: theharper Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2023 10:09 PM Title: Heroes, Succubus, and the Beach Ch:7

There's a twist I wasn't expecting. Doing a good job keep it up.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I am glad that you were surprised by the twist.

Reviewer: theharper Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2023 11:03 PM Title: Heroes, Succubus, and The Beach ch 6

Sounds like they're having fun. 

keep it up I enjoy reading these. oh and I like the photo that goes along with the cover.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I do too. It gives emphasis on Sarah's transformation

Reviewer: theharper Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2023 4:59 AM Title: Heroes, Succubus, and the Beach. Ch 3: Overall Chapter 36

I like how they're just kicking hanging out with each other.

And then the evil landlord comes in raising the rent on the bakery. lol This sounds like fun.

Author's Response: It is at times very casual as they just hangout between more of the size difference between the human characters and the succubus characters. Creates more depth to each person. The evil landlord will come back later. He will need someone to come and correct his behavior.

Reviewer: theharper Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2023 9:34 PM Title: Heroes, Succubus, and The Beach: Chapter 34

So I should have said this before. I really enjoyed this hole story line. It's hard to find a tall woman story let alone won that isn't overly abusive. so keep it up.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. This definitely a story with a gentle giantess/tall woman that is gentle. The main characters will focus on being kind.

Reviewer: unknown1 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2022 11:09 PM Title: Big Blonde School Beauty Royale: Chapter 22: A Small Foxy Mistake

Loving the Story so far!

Name may as well stay the same since people will know where to find the next pages

I read that as chapters at first, but I think Sarah is my favorite since the scene in 14 where he was eating her out and she grew!  I was only disappointed that she didn't think to take size instead of vitality to keep him awake longer :D

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review. Thank you for the input about the name and creating another story for it. I will be putting headers in front of chapters to give readers a sense of how things are broken up to make reading the story easier Chapter 14 was a fun one to write. In the future, there will definitely be some stuff where they take size or other things to keep things going to make it more interesting.

Reviewer: Simpson3k Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15 2022 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 12: A New Succubus Friend Created

I already hate Madi. She illegally entered private property, invaded peoples private space and the only person who argued against wiping her mind of the incident she pushes away with that girl night.

I really hope she is put back in her place by the queen at some point even below the future king.

Author's Response: I can agree that Madi did something very illegal by going into someone else’s home. Madi’s behavior is tied to some history that she has that will pop up later. She has not had a good life and not the best influence from her brothers. She is very defensive while having a temper. Her decisions are not always the smartest but she cares for those who are her friends. She is going to be a good friend of Sarah. She was breaking Sarah out her shy self to be more open. Madi will have to face some consequences in future tied to her succubus side.