Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22 2022 3:42 AM Title: The Lady At The Store - One-Shot

It would be nice if you continued this story, it's quite good.

Your subject matter is very interesting, and so is the flow of your story.  My only complaint are the spelling mistakes {e.g. "on" rather than "in" throughout the story} and some other minor grammatical errors, though nothing that really takes away from your story.

Looking forward to more of your works.

Author's Response:

Thank you D W, who knows maybe there'll be a second part ib the future...

And yes, hehe, I'll work on those little mistakes too.