Date: February 11 2023 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 13
Normally vore is a turn off for me, but because the girls cared about Markus so much, I stuck with it, and I'm glad I did. They had a lot of hot and sweet moments with him.
[Report This]Date: May 27 2022 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 13
Great story. Really enjoy the in-depth worldbuilding and the ending was very cathartic once Markus' misunderstanding was cleared up and the elves fawned all over him. Hope there's more stories from you in the future.
[Report This]Date: February 11 2022 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 13
How is this so good?! Great job on the characters and especially Markus? Too bad there isn't another chapter to detail the end from the elves' perspective.
Author's Response:
Thanks and yeah I'm starting to think an epilogue chapter is in order too, gotta plan that out carefully though. I don't want to undo the cathartic feeling with too much angst on their part, but I also need to avoid having them make light of his stress. It's a delicate balance and I expect it'll take a while to get right.
Date: January 21 2022 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 13
Man this was great. I really wished we could have gotten another chapter from the elve’s pov and their internal reactions to his fear.
Author's Response:
Yeah that seems to be the consensus, I'll see about examining how they'd react to the revelation and try to wrap it up nicer in an epilogue.
Author's Response:
Yeah that seems to be the consensus, I'll see about examining how they'd react to the revelation and try to wrap it up nicer in an epilogue.