[Report This]Date: October 23 2023 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
I would really love to see more of your stories, and even more for stories based on this universe of giant, hungry elves that you have created. Hope to read more of your stories soon!
[Report This]Date: September 26 2023 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this a lot and I am disappointed you never wrote the epilogue you spoke of.
I don't think the elves would think of this lightheartedly at all. They all knew something was wrong for a long period of time and this would have explained it all.
In fact I think the mage with the religious text might realize it was a mistake to not share that religion with Marcus so that he would understand why they would never have hurt him in the first place.
Also I really like the idea of Marcus marrying. I think that going into the details of that more would be quite interesting.
I know it's been a while since you've gotten a review, but given how much I've enjoyed this story, maybe I can help light that spark to get you going on that epilogue, or maybe even a sequel better yet!
Cheers!
Date: April 10 2023 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Man I love this story through and through, perfect balance of sweet and sexy
Date: September 05 2022 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like it a lot, the elves and the humans are both in a very strange position where they've unwittingly entangled the other over time lol.
Date: September 02 2022 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm a sucker for a gentle themed story peppered with vore. You're pretty detailed with your writing!
Something I love to run across is a human, who is undoubtedly safe in the company of his giant companions, yet still is scared of them at some base, internal level.
I liked the ending of this story with the elephant in the room finally being addressed and put to rest.
Trust is a very important thing when it comes to tiny/large relationships and friendships. Being reminded of the power dynamic, and then finding a way to equalize it really melts my heart.
(Yes, they could eat you. But they won't.)
Thanks for writing this!
[Report This]Date: April 30 2022 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
Cant get enough of this! The world is well written and the characters are charming...found your other story on psst and can wait to see where it goes! Keep up the good work, lol
[Report This]Date: January 19 2022 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really good story. I really enjoyed it, tho I feel like the ending could have been fleshed out a bit more. I hope to see more works from you!
Author's Response:
Thank you. And yeah, I struggle with ending stories properly. I might rewrite the last chapter later at some point in the future once I get better at that part. Or maybe just add an epilogue.
Date: January 18 2022 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
also you might get less reviews since you released all at once. But keep your head up!
Date: January 18 2022 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story is unbelievable I loved it. Wish more panty entrapment chapters. But characters were all nice and detailed.
Refreshing to see a completed story to. I look forward to more and this is by far going up there in my favorites.
Author's Response:
Hey thanks! It means a lot. I've been writing off and on for a couple years now, but this is the first time I've written smut outside of a one-off greentext. (And in fact, this used to be a chain of greens that I just decided to adapt as a test.) But I wasn't super sure if I was being descriptive enough/too purple/etc.