[Report This]Date: October 23 2023 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
I would really love to see more of your stories, and even more for stories based on this universe of giant, hungry elves that you have created. Hope to read more of your stories soon!
[Report This]Date: September 26 2023 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this a lot and I am disappointed you never wrote the epilogue you spoke of.
I don't think the elves would think of this lightheartedly at all. They all knew something was wrong for a long period of time and this would have explained it all.
In fact I think the mage with the religious text might realize it was a mistake to not share that religion with Marcus so that he would understand why they would never have hurt him in the first place.
Also I really like the idea of Marcus marrying. I think that going into the details of that more would be quite interesting.
I know it's been a while since you've gotten a review, but given how much I've enjoyed this story, maybe I can help light that spark to get you going on that epilogue, or maybe even a sequel better yet!
Cheers!
Date: June 28 2023 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
Amazing descriptions. The characters are charming ad believable, and the smut was well written. I'd love to see more stories from you down the road :]
Date: April 10 2023 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Man I love this story through and through, perfect balance of sweet and sexy
Date: February 11 2023 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 13
Normally vore is a turn off for me, but because the girls cared about Markus so much, I stuck with it, and I'm glad I did. They had a lot of hot and sweet moments with him.
Date: September 05 2022 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like it a lot, the elves and the humans are both in a very strange position where they've unwittingly entangled the other over time lol.
Date: September 02 2022 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm a sucker for a gentle themed story peppered with vore. You're pretty detailed with your writing!
Something I love to run across is a human, who is undoubtedly safe in the company of his giant companions, yet still is scared of them at some base, internal level.
I liked the ending of this story with the elephant in the room finally being addressed and put to rest.
Trust is a very important thing when it comes to tiny/large relationships and friendships. Being reminded of the power dynamic, and then finding a way to equalize it really melts my heart.
(Yes, they could eat you. But they won't.)
Thanks for writing this!
[Report This]Date: May 27 2022 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 13
Great story. Really enjoy the in-depth worldbuilding and the ending was very cathartic once Markus' misunderstanding was cleared up and the elves fawned all over him. Hope there's more stories from you in the future.
[Report This]Date: April 30 2022 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
Cant get enough of this! The world is well written and the characters are charming...found your other story on psst and can wait to see where it goes! Keep up the good work, lol
[Report This]Date: February 11 2022 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 13
How is this so good?! Great job on the characters and especially Markus? Too bad there isn't another chapter to detail the end from the elves' perspective.
Author's Response:
Thanks and yeah I'm starting to think an epilogue chapter is in order too, gotta plan that out carefully though. I don't want to undo the cathartic feeling with too much angst on their part, but I also need to avoid having them make light of his stress. It's a delicate balance and I expect it'll take a while to get right.
Date: January 21 2022 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 13
Man this was great. I really wished we could have gotten another chapter from the elve’s pov and their internal reactions to his fear.
Author's Response:
Yeah that seems to be the consensus, I'll see about examining how they'd react to the revelation and try to wrap it up nicer in an epilogue.
Author's Response:
Yeah that seems to be the consensus, I'll see about examining how they'd react to the revelation and try to wrap it up nicer in an epilogue.
[Report This]Date: January 19 2022 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really good story. I really enjoyed it, tho I feel like the ending could have been fleshed out a bit more. I hope to see more works from you!
Author's Response:
Thank you. And yeah, I struggle with ending stories properly. I might rewrite the last chapter later at some point in the future once I get better at that part. Or maybe just add an epilogue.
Date: January 18 2022 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
also you might get less reviews since you released all at once. But keep your head up!
Date: January 18 2022 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story is unbelievable I loved it. Wish more panty entrapment chapters. But characters were all nice and detailed.
Refreshing to see a completed story to. I look forward to more and this is by far going up there in my favorites.
Author's Response:
Hey thanks! It means a lot. I've been writing off and on for a couple years now, but this is the first time I've written smut outside of a one-off greentext. (And in fact, this used to be a chain of greens that I just decided to adapt as a test.) But I wasn't super sure if I was being descriptive enough/too purple/etc.