Reviews For God Particle
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Reviewer: LilBob Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17 2022 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Earth's little day

Loving this story still! Having James as God looks like a lot of fun, indeed.

I think there might be a plot hole, though. How can James’s friends be hanging around at the high school, when James made every school disappear?



Author's Response:

Oh heck, that was an oversight

Thanks for pointing it out! I fixed it and made it better c:

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