Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06 2022 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

Terrific story, but your use of paragraphs incorrect grammatically leaves parts of your story confusing.

You have a great story, you just have to clean up your grammar to make it read more correctly. 

You have a story potentially to be top notch, just do a spellcheck before posting.

As to story content, you are top notch.  Please continue this interesting story.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your feedback. I highly appreciate it. How do you suggest I improve the grammar and spelling here?