[Report This]Date: May 26 2023 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning
Really good stuff here!
Date: August 30 2022 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning
This story was sooooooo gooooodddd!!!!!
All the stuff out in the backayrd was incredible, from Kari sliding down Beccas back into her butt to the mother almost crushing the three girls while doing the weeding. This has to be some of the best unaware garden stuff I have ever read! I would really love to see you do another unaware garden story some day as all the little details for the scale of threats and insignificance of the girls was just... perfect.
You are such a talented unaware writer
[Report This]Date: March 12 2022 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning
Loved it, especially the chemistry between all six girls, I really enjoyed the stomach scenes with Kari and Marcia also.
[Report This]Date: March 12 2022 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Rescue
Wonderful read. Did notice slight discrepancy in story. Early chapters had the shrink ray only affecting one person at a time, even when the shrunken girls were on a person. Girls on them didn’t shrink again. But then this chapter has 2 tiny folks next to each other but grows back only one. It’s said that is how it works. Tiny ended up on the re-enlarged girl. Then now the shrink ray can’t grow back the tiny without turning normal girl into giant. Other than that it was a great chapter or ending. Thanks for uploading.
Author's Response:
Seems like a bit of a nitpick, considering I’m not a professional writer and do this for free. But to each their own I guess.
[Report This]Date: March 11 2022 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Rescue
Sorry, I actually liked your story. It’s my first time rating a story on this site.
Author's Response:
All good, man! Glad you enjoyed the story!
Date: January 25 2022 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Realization
What a terrible death, to be swallowed alive by a giant blue jay. She will have a painful death i think ... crushed inside his powerful gizzard and then digested by the bird .
But i love this part so much, it's fascinating. I can't wait to read the next part, your stories are so good and amazing, I really love them <3 !!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Hope you enjoyed!
Date: January 25 2022 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning
very good story, I can't wait to read the rest with parents or mature unconscious giants
Author's Response:
Thanks! Hope you enjoyed!
[Report This]Date: January 25 2022 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Realization
Amazing chapter. Can’t wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: January 05 2022 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning
I thought Becca’s friends were gonna shrink a second time to really micro size. Surprised me when they didn’t but being surprised is always a good thing.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: January 04 2022 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning
Interesting start. I’m curious to see what happens. May I ask, though, if you are planning to continue your “Block Party” story? I was really excited for that one.
Author's Response:
Thanks, and currently I have no plans on adding to Block Party any time soon.
Date: January 04 2022 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning
Interesting chapter. With Becca being hit by the shrink way while Veronica, Maria, and Kari were on her body I thought they would be shrunk down even further. Still good job. With all the talk about sex I hope one or more of them gets caught in the middle of a normal size couple having sex and gets pushed into their womb by the males cum. Then again with a vore tag I also hope it includes full tour vore with the one (or more) swallowed surviving and coming out the other end. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: January 04 2022 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning
With this stories focus being shrunken women and with those tags I think I'm going to like this story. Also I hope that part about "riding Ryan's dick" is foreshadowing. Looking forward to what's next
Author's Response:
Thanks! Hope you enjoyed the story!
Date: January 04 2022 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning
It's a good start, looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thank you, hope you enjoyed!