Reviewer: Jim1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2022 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 20 DA chapter 35

Curious if the growth rate will either stay the same or pick up the pace in this story, given Dan's concerns about the house being big enough for the women to live comfortably for the foreseeable future.

If it's not a minor inconvenience, perhaps have a scene in each chapter where the men measure the women (or the women measure themselves) in order to keep track of their heights throughout the story, so that the reader has a better sense of the growing size disparity between the women and their male counterparts.

Otherwise, amusing stuff overall and hope to see more.