Date: February 05 2022 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
The story is getting awesome, but please make the side effect for moms much more than girls, I wish to see they become so huge and sexy in each family, at least double size and much sexier than daughters!
Thank you so much!!
Author's Response:
Sorry, but for this story, I have a specific size in mind for both the mother and daughter. If you go to my DA page (gentlegiant1970), I did a render of a possible future with a smaller Dan sitting on the lap of a much bigger, and pregnant, Valerie. But I am so grateful that you like the story!
Author's Response:
Sorry, but for this story, I have a specific size in mind for both the mother and daughter. If you go to my DA page (gentlegiant1970), I did a render of a possible future with a smaller Dan sitting on the lap of a much bigger, and pregnant, Valerie. But I am so grateful that you like the story!
Date: February 04 2022 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
You mad genius! That ending to the last chapter was Great!! Im happy both Dana and Bill are finding success in their love lives(I love that you named Dana's friend Matt Murdock!) I'm also excited to see what happens next with Dan and Valerie!
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words. I wanted to make sure that Matt Murdock had a girlfriend that didn't try to kill him!
[Report This]Date: January 24 2022 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice update
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: January 23 2022 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Glad to see this story continuing. Hope you'll keep it going. Wondering if this will turn into a sort of 'New World Order' kind of story, assuming a large percentage of women end up getting this vaccine. Anyways, good stuff so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. I don’t plan on taking this into a New World Order direction. I currently have a James Bond story going that is heading in that direction.
Date: January 23 2022 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hi! Just wanted to say I'm really enjoying your story and I'm a bit excited to see what's in store for Bill and his new friend😉 I'm also happy to see you using Matt Murdock being used positively 😄👍🏾👍🏾
Author's Response:
Thank you. I wasn’t going to include any female other than Bill’s mom and sister as being affected, but the opportunity to include a potential love interest also being affected was too good to pass up.
[Report This]Date: January 03 2022 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the husband wife theme. Great start and Looking forward to the next chapters
Author's Response:
Thank you! I tried to make this as gentle as possible, with both mom and daughter being affected, but staying true to the character.
[Report This]Date: January 01 2022 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic story!
Author's Response:
Thank you. It has been really fun to write, as I have been trying to explore subtle interactions between mom and daughter with other people, as well as the son with his mom and sister, plus maybe others as well.
Date: December 31 2021 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting to see how this story develops, especially if the mother and daughter keep up their rates of growth. Hope you'll keep this story going.
Author's Response:
It has been a fun write so far. I just have to work out details if I do continue the story, as it would involve an entirely new house and car and clothes. But I am really glad you like it so far!