Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2022 4:28 AM Title: Reformed as Quinn's Asshole

I'm kind of hoping Quinn notices Hunter in / as her asshole and is ok with it.  It would be pretty cool if she decides to keep Hunter as her living asshole.

Really great story.

One point of note, the bladder is part of the urine track.  In this chapter and the previous one you mentioned Quinn's intestinal track containing the bladder {i.e. urine track}.  They are two different bodily waste systems.  I think you may want to replace "bladder" with "intestinal".

I have an upcoming story, "Conjured Portals", you might be interested in the girl named Katie.  Keep an eye out for my posting of it.

Hope there are more chapters coming of this terrific story.

Author's Response: I honestly didn't realize that, thanks for letting me know DW!  I've edited the chapter, but will definitely have to keep an eye out for that in the future.  Can't wait to see your story!