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Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2024 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 18 - A vermin’s plea

Nice chapter.   I liked the twist of Matthew living.

Here are the fixes for chapter 18

her panty / her panties
had a mean / had a means
picked hum with / picked him up with
skin was pal, / skin was pale,
he was brough to / he was brought to
eating peoples / eating people
bigger vermins / bigger vermin

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