Reviewer: breastclimber Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26 2024 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Officers down

Wow, lot's going on in Chapter 17, love it!

As usual here are your fixes

bedrunk / be drunk

learnt / learned

get out of here in one place / get out of here in one piece

too far off a door / too far off from a door

full of peoples he now / full of people he now

got up to quickly / got up too quickly

gang he was a part off / gang he was a part of

who was couching blood / who was coughing blood