Reviewer: breastclimber Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16 2024 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Headwinds of change

I am loving this story.

Here are the fixes for chapter 16

needs fixing / fixed

she said her secretary / she said to her secretary

he rencounter / her encounter

skilled Governor had / skilled Governors had

hen-mother / then-mother

found wanting anything / found wanting for anything

all had been youngers / all had been younger

compared to their better / compared to their betters

thirty-seven years old woman  / thirty-seven year old woman

you as befit the / you as befits the

Wrong, on all account / Wrong, on all accounts

started to fell aroused / started to feel aroused

sexy as hell to / sexy as hell too

unruly brat are / unruly brats are

Author's Response:

As always, thanks for the review ! I'll correct the last two chapters soonish