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Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2024 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 15 - In danger

I keep loving this story!  I hope you find some time to work in spelling and grammatical fixes.   Here is the list for this chapter.

broken / fixed

appartement / apartment

fear of being found off / fear of being found out

wiggle into her toilets / wiggle into her toilet

for God’s know / for God knows

strop trying to ignore me / stop trying to ignore me

Like our parents were / Like our parents had

get back on her usual demeanor / get back to her usual demeanor

fish him out of their confine / fish him out of their confines

Small were already / Smalls were already

I didn’t knew she / I didn’t know she

you being here add to it / you being here adds to it

What did had told you / What have I told you

have to call sick / have to call in sick

con-con-consi-der / con-con-consi-ders

And if he remained here but that this Giantess terror killed or sent her sister to the hospital? / If he remained here, what what would happen if the Giantess terror killed or sent her sister to the hospital?

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