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Reviewer: breastclimber Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2024 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Criminals

Love this series very much, so I came up with a list of fixes for you for chapter 14.   Thanks for a great story!


chapter 14 fixes:


The format below is:  Needs fixing / fixed


possible link / possible links

or if we did / or if he did

No move aside / Now move aside

hairs samples / hair samples

reminded as / reminded him as

apartement / apartment

biding / bidding

griped / gripped

coping / copping

appartements / apartments

Or as he / Or has he

appartement / apartment

who know Matthew / who knew Matthew

pub imply / pub implies

hadn't be completely / hadn't been completely

to bulge on it / to budge on it

your brain out / your brains out

we ball at / we bail at

It's one the / It's on the

for starter / for starters

as if you had / as if you have



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot ! i'll try to correct it sooner rather than later !

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