Date: April 26 2024 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 19
Attack on Gigantopia.
[Report This]Date: March 18 2024 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 18 - A vermin’s plea
Nice chapter. I liked the twist of Matthew living.
Here are the fixes for chapter 18
her panty / her panties
had a mean / had a means
picked hum with / picked him up with
skin was pal, / skin was pale,
he was brough to / he was brought to
eating peoples / eating people
bigger vermins / bigger vermin
Date: March 18 2024 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Underbelly
Can you make a chart of the different classes and their sizes?
Author's Response:
Sure, here it is !
Normals (they are, well, normal peoples, but smaller than us because they have come to see height as unnatractive); Smalls (around 20 meters, give or take a few; the tallest would be around 28 max, however) ; Giants (around 50 meters, max 55); Titans (around 200 meters, the smaller are 190, the taller 210); Gigantics (basically, they are all exactly 500 meters tall)
Date: March 15 2024 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Underbelly
Do you have a patreon? If so please send a link because I would love to support you.
Your MAJOR/minor stories where really helpful to me a few years ago
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot !
I had a Patreon but closed it as I felt bad taking people's pay for a rivulet of content produced.
Comments on my work really support me more, in the end ^^
[Report This]Date: February 26 2024 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Officers down
Wow, lot's going on in Chapter 17, love it!
As usual here are your fixes
bedrunk / be drunk
learnt / learned
get out of here in one place / get out of here in one piece
too far off a door / too far off from a door
full of peoples he now / full of people he now
got up to quickly / got up too quickly
gang he was a part off / gang he was a part of
who was couching blood / who was coughing blood
[Report This]Date: February 16 2024 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Headwinds of change
I am loving this story.
Here are the fixes for chapter 16
needs fixing / fixed
she said her secretary / she said to her secretary
he rencounter / her encounter
skilled Governor had / skilled Governors had
hen-mother / then-mother
found wanting anything / found wanting for anything
all had been youngers / all had been younger
compared to their better / compared to their betters
thirty-seven years old woman / thirty-seven year old woman
you as befit the / you as befits the
Wrong, on all account / Wrong, on all accounts
started to fell aroused / started to feel aroused
sexy as hell to / sexy as hell too
unruly brat are / unruly brats are
Author's Response:
As always, thanks for the review ! I'll correct the last two chapters soonish
[Report This]Date: February 02 2024 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 15 - In danger
I keep loving this story! I hope you find some time to work in spelling and grammatical fixes. Here is the list for this chapter.
broken / fixed
appartement / apartment
fear of being found off / fear of being found out
wiggle into her toilets / wiggle into her toilet
for God’s know / for God knows
strop trying to ignore me / stop trying to ignore me
Like our parents were / Like our parents had
get back on her usual demeanor / get back to her usual demeanor
fish him out of their confine / fish him out of their confines
Small were already / Smalls were already
I didn’t knew she / I didn’t know she
you being here add to it / you being here adds to it
What did had told you / What have I told you
have to call sick / have to call in sick
con-con-consi-der / con-con-consi-ders
And if he remained here but that this Giantess terror killed or sent her sister to the hospital? / If he remained here, what what would happen if the Giantess terror killed or sent her sister to the hospital?
Date: January 19 2024 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Criminals
Love this series very much, so I came up with a list of fixes for you for chapter 14. Thanks for a great story!
chapter 14 fixes:
The format below is: Needs fixing / fixed
possible link / possible links
or if we did / or if he did
No move aside / Now move aside
hairs samples / hair samples
reminded as / reminded him as
apartement / apartment
biding / bidding
griped / gripped
coping / copping
appartements / apartments
Or as he / Or has he
appartement / apartment
who know Matthew / who knew Matthew
pub imply / pub implies
hadn't be completely / hadn't been completely
to bulge on it / to budge on it
your brain out / your brains out
we ball at / we bail at
It's one the / It's on the
for starter / for starters
as if you had / as if you have
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot ! i'll try to correct it sooner rather than later !
[Report This]Date: November 02 2023 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Underbelly
Man just found this series and I’m loving it, thanks for the chapters
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot !
If you like Gigantopia, there is three other stories, if you need to slate your thirst for it XD
[Report This]Date: October 19 2023 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Respite
Good to see the returning characters from "A Small family", it seems that the Normal male protagonists in these stories always win big, haha!
Based on the size tag I assume there will be appearance of Titans or even Gigantics eventually? And I definitely look forward to that.
Author's Response:
I can't tell anything about larger size persons... yet !
[Report This]Date: October 17 2023 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Respite
Very nice Break from the action chapter. Are chapters 8-10 available anywhere? your patreon doesn't seem to exist anymore.
Author's Response:
My USB key haha !
I deleted the patreon because I felt bed getting money for the amount of writing I can produce now.
But each time I finish a chapter I'll try to post one of the others, and I'm focusing solely on this story for now, so hopefully it'll be quick !
Date: September 26 2023 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Bad news
YESSSSSS YESSSSS YESSSSSJEOEOSDJDU I USED TO PRAY FOR TIMES LIKE THIS!!!!!!!
Date: November 05 2022 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Nightmare fuel
Amazing!! Hopefully I get to see more of Matthew!!
Date: November 04 2022 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Nightmare fuel
Yessssss. I am so glad this got an update the dream sequence was great and we stan Christina in this house hold,please make more this one is so underrated.
[Report This]Date: October 12 2022 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Partners
Us they by any chance this story would continue
Author's Response:
I have a few more chapters. Not many because I have a harder time writing since a few months back, but I'll try to post it and perhaps finish the story, someday ?
Date: May 04 2022 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Underbelly
Why does this have ni reviews it's really good so far can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
More will come later this year, when I'll have more time to write for myself :)