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Reviewer: DollSize Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20 2022 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 8

I wouldn’t mind seeing Melissa shrink with him cause she still be big to him n small to her ….regardless it’s good stuff

Author's Response:

Thanks Dollsize, glad you're liking it :D

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2022 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 8

Hmm, I wasn’t expecting Melissa to be that suspicious of Lillian so quickly, but I guess she figured it out so it makes sense. 

Also, I’m not sure if Lillian is nervous of Mellissa drinking her milk or not. It was kinda hard to tell since I wasn’t sure if Lilian was faking her worry for Mellissa or not after Melissa said she drank the milk. 

I like Jonathan’s character in this chapter. While his date is there, he still can’t help get turned on by Lillian and I love how Lillian takes advantage of that and hugs him all the time. 

Mellissa sometimes seems to smart for this story. Lol. It reminds me when I’m watching some sex comedy or mystery and if you had just one of the characters be smart, the movie would’ve been over within minutes. 

I think part of me wonders if Melissa might sabotage Lillian’s plans and I hope that isn’t the case. 

The breast pump cliffhanger actually didn’t feel like a cliffhanger. She just had a breast bump and I thought there was going to be something else. It seems like she’s just ready to shrink Jonathan some more. 

Well, I think Melissa has sort of overstayed her welcome. I like how she’s also excited for Jonathan to shrink, but I think she’s is blocking Lillian from shrinking him and I think we are all excited for that. 

Maybe if Lillian tells Mellissa that she shrank Jonathan on purpose, maybe Melissa would let Lillian complete her task. Imagine them working together to shrink Jonathan. The only problem I would see is that both ladies want to play with him. 

Anyway, I can’t wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review TomSpeedy, I also think Melissa's too Smart for the story, but Simeone has ti be LOL.

I'm still planning the future interactions between Melissa and Lillian, so far, I think I just came up with the right one, but I don't wanna spoil anything here.


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