[Report This]Date: January 22 2022 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 4
Hmm, I completely didn’t expect the whole date thing happening. I wonder if Lillian is ok with Jonathan going on this date. Would she get jealous?
Also, I love the interaction with Melissa. She was so friendly and positive and didn’t comment on his height right away and only did it once they had some chemistry.
As for the new height being a surprise, wouldn’t Jonathan realize he was a few inches shorter by having loose clothes? Even I didn’t know he actually shrank that much until Melissa pointed out the difference. So I’m curious if the clothes shrank or maybe they are now more loose and comfortable so he didn’t notice.
Damn, Lilian was thinking of keeping him prisoner in her basement? That sounds hot! I would have loved to see that happen. Lol. The shock on his face and reaction would be perfect!
Hopefully, Jonathan meets with Lilian again soon. Melissa is pretty cool, but Lilian just oozes that sexiness.
Well, I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Haha, yes the date was a random idea, but I kind of liked it. And also I have something planned for Melissa and Lillian's relationship... But that'll be in the future.
About Jonathan not noticing the 4 inch height loss... Yeah I could've developed more on him noticing, but we can say clothes fit better/loose in him.
And yes, Lillian and him will meet soon... Very soon.
Thank you for the review TomSpeedy :'D