Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2022 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 3

Whoa! This is easily the best chapter so far! So much content and that cliffhanger was amazing!

First off, that lunch. I love how you described what he should wear and when he should go to her house. Most of these details get skipped in other stories but you put them in, which is nice and helps me relate to this guy. It’s really cool to hear his thoughts as he goes through stuff.

The size of the meal portions was also great. It just shows how hungry she is and could also be foreshadowing of how hungry she is for him. I mean, he has this amazing meal in front of him, and he could barely handle it, which could be a metaphor for Lillian. However, she devours her food which makes me think that she will devour him eventually lol. 

The milk in the beginning is interesting. At first, I thought it’s some shrinking milk, I mean, it still could be, but is it also her breast milk too? Or does she replace the milk with some random milk-like liquid? Whatever it is, he really, really liked it. Lol

Then we get the shopping scene. I love how Lillian is taking over his life, piece by piece. She’s giving him a meal, taking him shopping, driving him places. Soon, they will be swimming, or wrestling, and maybe sleeping together. Maybe they take a bath together or give each other a massage. I could see him moving in and staying at her house for some time too. Basically, they seem destined to be together and I love it!

While shopping, I love the little comments she makes toward him. Calling him honey, asking him if he wants certain items and stuff. Imagine going to a kink store and she playfully asks if he wants to try a dildo or something, haha! 

Lastly, Lillian helps take the groceries inside and seems to be replacing the milk with her own milk. We don’t know what exactly does “her milk” consist of, but it doesn’t seem to have affected out main character yet. Maybe it’s a gradual change. We shall see. My guess is that he wakes up with some physical change. 

Anyway, excellent chapter and I can’t wait for the next one! 

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for the review! I'm happy to hear you like the chapter, and also the little details I put in it. And yes, as time goes by, the idea is to make Lillian and Jonathan closer and closer. About the milk... Well, that'll be explained later on. But for now I can assure you there'll be some changes in him when he wakes up :D