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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2023 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

Cute erotic story (for the most part - didn't like the scat verbiage at the end). I don't recall there being an in-depth description of James in butt plug form, but it would have been cool to have some of his physical characteristics viewable even in object form, so that someone looking closely might realize it was him. I do really like the fact that Alannah could communicate with him through the app - that made the story much better than it otherwise would have been if it had simply been unaware. I think the best stories start out as unaware with a slow burn towards realization and this story had that.

Reviewer: clubby88 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2022 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

this story is so hot I would love a sequel to this too

Reviewer: clubby88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2021 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

would love a sequel to this

Reviewer: Captainrdj Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25 2021 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

Absolutely loved this one? Hope we see a chapter II, maybe where he’s put through some more unpleasant anal play before being reunited with his girlfriend? 

Reviewer: ILike Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2021 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love your transformation stories the most especially with unaware. Great plot. Also a huge fan of those bug tf plots with the mrshit series. Is there a 2nd chapter coming for this one? 

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 20 2021 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

Another good one, Kickyou.

I love how you put twists and turns in your stories. And, of course, the theme of "be careful what you wish for" always plays well. 

Reviewer: Lupe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2021 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

This story definitely was great. Probably one of the best from you so far!

I would be interested in the alternatives _ what if he and his girlfriend were able to go through with it? What if her sister found him instead?

Transformation stories are so rare. I was thinking he was going to end up as a thong or something, but this was a very fun take. Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2021 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

Totally loved this story. The unfair aspect is perfect of this plot. Sadly the ending was a bit open end, hope there will be a 2nd chapter some day. Would love to find out what happens with James and her taking a shit.

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