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Reviewer: Sovereign Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 16 2021 2:40 PM Title: Oops, I Ate My Adopted Brother!

Man I love what you did! Those teasers didnt even hold a candle to the final story. I loved how you did the stomach scenes and just the casual disregard she displayed at his plight insode her body! I really hope your people love this story so we can continue!-M



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2021 2:17 AM Title: Oops, I Ate My Adopted Brother!

Wow.  Interesting story but also kind of depressing.  Poor Tristan.  I kind of hope he does tell Olivia what happened or at least she figures it out.  Mothers tend to have a good 6th sense about their kids hiding things.  It would make for an interesting drama moment of Olivia discovering her daughter's true nature and wanting to keep her family together.

But seriously though, the trope of "the bullied tiny is bullied into staying silent" kind of falls flat to me.  Really hoping Tristan doesn't go that route, or at least not for long.



Author's Response:

Yeah I understand some of the elements wouldn't appease some of my readers. I appreciate the feedback for the portions you enjoyed though, and thanks so much for reading! <3

Reviewer: Jsmith20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 16 2021 1:12 AM Title: Oops, I Ate My Adopted Brother!

This was great! 


I think seeing what Clara will do now that she has a tiny to keep will be very interesting. She holds all the power in that relationship. If you continue I'd love to see some foot action and more butt stuff.  




Author's Response:

I might do a patreon pill and see if my readers want more and I might continue as a mini series

Reviewer: Godzilla 2000 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2021 10:47 PM Title: Oops, I Ate My Adopted Brother!

Well mmmm what a stupid ***** clara is i know she not bright up there like really why would you dispose a tiny that was sitting on the coffee table in the first place since they dont get none in the house any beside the scat crap i didnt read that just assume what happen good read  all i got to so is tristen dont F up 

Reviewer: EvilxxIncarnate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2021 7:12 PM Title: Oops, I Ate My Adopted Brother!

Very nice. Clara sounds fun.



Author's Response:

What's this!? A 5 star rating from Evil? Blasphemy ;)

Thanks for reading! Glad you enjoyed it! :)

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