Date: November 26 2021 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 2
Nothing better than a hot woman's breast milk, except if it causes men to shrink and obey her. What more could one ask for?
This is a fantastic story. My only complaint is that Mike actually thinks not shrinking any further is better than drinking more of Sophie's breast milk and shrinking.
I get the purple liquid; but green breast milk, is Sophia becoming She-Hulk { FTR: ULTRA HOT }?
If I could make one criticism, divide your paragraphs up more. As a reader, going through long lines of text which are undivided upon the screen make it unnecessarily harder to read. Not that you have done anything grammatically wrong, it is simply from the perspective of the readers ease of reading.
Looking forward with anticipation to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: November 25 2021 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 2
Whoa! This chapter was amazing! I love how Sophie treated Mike in this chapter. She completely dominated him and he was basically helpless. Even her presence alone puts a spell on him.
4 ft tall now. Looks like the fun is getting started. I can’t wait for him to shrink even more and for Jason to get a taste of her medicine next.
Also, those perverted students might be next on the menu too. As you said with Sophie, there’s so many possibilities for her and I can’t wait for the next chapter!