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Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26 2021 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 2

Nothing better than a hot woman's breast milk, except if it causes men to shrink and obey her.  What more could one ask for?

This is a fantastic story.  My only complaint is that Mike actually thinks not shrinking any further is better than drinking more of Sophie's breast milk and shrinking.

I get the purple liquid; but green breast milk, is Sophia becoming She-Hulk { FTR: ULTRA HOT }?

If I could make one criticism, divide your paragraphs up more.  As a reader, going through long lines of text which are undivided upon the screen make it unnecessarily harder to read.  Not that you have done anything grammatically wrong, it is simply from the perspective of the readers ease of reading.

Looking forward with anticipation to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Footsteps Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25 2021 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, I can’t remember the last time I literally trembled while reading a story. It’s as if Sophie’s power extends beyond the confines of her fictional world and into mine (and I’m guessing she’d find that hilarious and pathetic!)

Its so good, I can’t picture this getting better but I know that it will. I’m hooked!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2021 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 2

Whoa! This chapter was amazing! I love how Sophie treated Mike in this chapter. She completely dominated him and he was basically helpless. Even her presence alone puts a spell on him. 

4 ft tall now. Looks like the fun is getting started. I can’t wait for him to shrink even more and for Jason to get a taste of her medicine next. 

Also, those perverted students might be next on the menu too. As you said with Sophie, there’s so many possibilities for her and I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2021 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, I just love the setup to this story! It’s very well detailed. There’s plenty of dynamics and characters to focus on. There’s the husband, stepson, and also her students! Can’t wait for her to interact with them all! 

I do admit, the green milk is a new idea to me. I’m curious where that idea came from. However, I like it’s purpose and it seems like we may see it next time.

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Footsteps Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2021 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

A revenge story; I love it!


im excited to see whether it’s an immediate shrink after one time or a gradual shrink that happens after multiple breastfeeding sessions. If it’s the latter, I wonder if Sophie will have to force them to keep feeding (something that would get progressively easier the smaller and weaker they get) or if the addiction will overpower their own sense of self preservation. 

It’s going to be exciting either way!

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