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Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2022 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 5

Terrific story (though I have to complain that in the last chapter most of the boys on the floor were 1 to 2 feet tall, then in this chapter 3 to 4 feet tall.  Did they grow bigger or was the last chapter a typo?)

I was curious as how this is going to play out as it is happening in public.  My guess is that Mr. Maroney is a goner.

What will happen to all those breast starved, shrunken boys on the floor? {breast pets???}  What will become of Mike and Jason?

So many questions.  So many possibilities?

Despite the obvious public / social questions, an absolutely terrific story.

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 09 2022 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 4

That was great!  Really GREAT!!!

Can't wait to see what Sophie does with all the shrunken boys in her classroom.  Very curious as to how all the girls in the classroom accept this?  Will they take up their shrunken classmates as their own, perhaps as pets or slaves?  Will Sophia keep them all as her own?  Will the girls learn how to breastfeed and control their male classmates?

I like how standard norms are completely ignored, and fantasy / desire dictates what happens.  The complete loss of Deshaun and Logan as classmates is incredible.

They boys licking up her breast milk from the floor is a great image, "Spencer lapping away like a desperate puppy", well done.

Can't wait to read where this goes.

Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2022 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loving this story.  Can”t wait for more.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2022 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 4

Wow, I can’t believed I missed out on chapter 3 when you updated it, so today I got to read both chapters 3 and 4. 

And they were amazing. I think I liked the teasing of Jason the best, especially when he shrank way further than his dad. Also, having him at the height of Sophie’s crotch could’ve been a great oral opportunity, but I guess she’s saving him for some other fun. 

I love how she quickly dominated her house now and she is truly the queen of the house now. 

Then we get the school scene and you could just feel the power Sophie possesses. Not just with the shrinking, but also with her words. That was impressive. And the way she shrank Jake before class so he would be an example for the class was awesome. 

I love how this story is escalating and I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2021 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 3

One has to wonder if one of these shrunken guys will be turned into a baby sized.

The potential humiliation of now 3' Jake is pretty hot.

A possible accompaniment suggestion, any links to images of all these different bra and bra cup size bras?

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26 2021 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 2

Nothing better than a hot woman's breast milk, except if it causes men to shrink and obey her.  What more could one ask for?

This is a fantastic story.  My only complaint is that Mike actually thinks not shrinking any further is better than drinking more of Sophie's breast milk and shrinking.

I get the purple liquid; but green breast milk, is Sophia becoming She-Hulk { FTR: ULTRA HOT }?

If I could make one criticism, divide your paragraphs up more.  As a reader, going through long lines of text which are undivided upon the screen make it unnecessarily harder to read.  Not that you have done anything grammatically wrong, it is simply from the perspective of the readers ease of reading.

Looking forward with anticipation to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Footsteps Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25 2021 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, I can’t remember the last time I literally trembled while reading a story. It’s as if Sophie’s power extends beyond the confines of her fictional world and into mine (and I’m guessing she’d find that hilarious and pathetic!)

Its so good, I can’t picture this getting better but I know that it will. I’m hooked!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2021 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 2

Whoa! This chapter was amazing! I love how Sophie treated Mike in this chapter. She completely dominated him and he was basically helpless. Even her presence alone puts a spell on him. 

4 ft tall now. Looks like the fun is getting started. I can’t wait for him to shrink even more and for Jason to get a taste of her medicine next. 

Also, those perverted students might be next on the menu too. As you said with Sophie, there’s so many possibilities for her and I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2021 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, I just love the setup to this story! It’s very well detailed. There’s plenty of dynamics and characters to focus on. There’s the husband, stepson, and also her students! Can’t wait for her to interact with them all! 

I do admit, the green milk is a new idea to me. I’m curious where that idea came from. However, I like it’s purpose and it seems like we may see it next time.

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Footsteps Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2021 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

A revenge story; I love it!

im excited to see whether it’s an immediate shrink after one time or a gradual shrink that happens after multiple breastfeeding sessions. If it’s the latter, I wonder if Sophie will have to force them to keep feeding (something that would get progressively easier the smaller and weaker they get) or if the addiction will overpower their own sense of self preservation. 

It’s going to be exciting either way!

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