Date: November 27 2021 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 7: SIMON SAYS... IT'S LIFE OR DEATH!
This is a really good story. Really hoping to see more gentle/wholesome moments as the story continues.
[Report This]Date: November 18 2021 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 7: SIMON SAYS... IT'S LIFE OR DEATH!
It's strange. I thought sure I had reviewed the first three chapters (glowingly!). But, they disappeared. So, I re-read them. Then, waltzed through the remaining four chapters. My evaluation, thus far?
Awesome job! :-)
Author's Response: Thanks, friend! Glad you're enjoying. More to come soon!
[Report This]Date: November 17 2021 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 7: SIMON SAYS... IT'S LIFE OR DEATH!
Hi there! I’ve been avoiding reading reviews for this one because I didn’t want anything spoiled. I intended to leave one to say my thoughts at the end of chapter 6, but you pretty much wrote exactly what my expressed desires would have been, and now I’m hesitant to make any predictions or suggestions whatsoever because I am more inclined to trust that I very closely share your tastes! And it’s more fun to be surprised by your creative inspirations than to endeavor to guide them with mine (I can just write my own darn stories for that).
Anyway, I’m loving this story so far. Gentle/safe/willing vore is absolutely my favorite around, and I always remark on how shamefully little there is when I truly feel like it’s more realistic that people wouldn’t want to hurt or kill each other for cheap thrills (not that I’m against fatal. Everything has its place).
I enjoy the rapidity with which their mutual affection blossomed, I love that they went for it, and I like that there’s some risk involved because that just increases the thrill. Though I think it would be hours before any real damage could be done, I also get that most young adults gulping down their crushes aren’t biologists. Lol.
Before this meanders too long, I’m very much looking forward to more chapters from this! I cannot wait to see Beck and Simon’s relationship grow and to see what Milla thinks about it, if she wasn’t secretly hoping they’d become an item anyway and left them alone on purpose due to secret suspicions about her roommate’s tiny “interests.”
10/10! Thanks for sharing your craft with the community!
Author's Response:
Holy crap, Xiao-renzhe! Thanks so much for commenting, you're one of my favorite authors on this site!!
I absolutely agree that there's a dearth of G/S/W vore out there, on this site and others. Like your "Borrowing a Bite," I wanted "Fear and Delight" to be a romance first and erotica second; that meant that the characters had to learn to trust each other and genuinely care about the others' wants and needs and safety.
(And yes, I know that Simon would've probably been quite safe inside Beck for at least a few hours, but Simon gave her a 5-minute window of guaranteed safety and she cares too much about him already to risk more than that, the sweet girl).
Thanks again for reading, and I hope you stick around for more!
[Report This]Date: November 17 2021 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 7: SIMON SAYS... IT'S LIFE OR DEATH!
Love this chapter, especially with the stuff inside Beck’s stomach. Though, I do have to ask, have you got a full tour chapter planned? I would love to see Simon go all the way, from mouth to the toilet. Haha.
Author's Response:
Hullo friend! Thanks for chiming in, I'm glad you enjoyed the internal stuff. I was encouraged by a few other readers to include details about the journey inside Beck from Simon's perspective, and it sounds like the extra effort paid off.
I don't know if there will be full tour in this story yet or not. It's not a particular interest of mine, and I don't think Beck would be comfortable having Simon take such a big risk inside her. But never say never: if enough people clamor for it, maybe there's another (hitherto unseen) character who'll be more willing to experiment in that realm.
Thanks for reading, and I hope you'll keep coming back for more!