Date: November 14 2021 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 6: SIMON SAYS... GIVE ME A THRILL!
You better bring Simon back ;(. If not imma be so mad and sad but this is soo good because why is this story making me feel that way!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, friend! And while I can't say for certain, the story's probably making you feel that way because that's how I wanted you to feel when I wrote it.
I want these characters to feel like people; that way you can believe both their sexual chemistry and their romantic relationship simultaneously.
Tune in next episode... you don't want to miss what's coming next!
Date: November 14 2021 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 6: SIMON SAYS... GIVE ME A THRILL!
I only make reviews were stories have been fantastic. This one is one of those. I am loving the pace of the story. I understand about wanting to have feedback, I am that kind of writer also. I hope this goes good and I am expecting more for it. Good Luck and I am cheering for you!
Author's Response:
Thanks much friend! Keep writing as well; I'm so glad people are enjoying this story so much!
Date: November 13 2021 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 6: SIMON SAYS... GIVE ME A THRILL!
Nice story :)
I hope they will manage to save before its to late.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, friend! And yeah I hope so too - but it's not like I control that outcome, now is it?
But truly: I wouldn't worry too much. Beck loves Simon too much to let anything happen to him. Surely she'll rescue him from inside her...
...won't she? ;)
[Report This]Date: November 13 2021 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 6: SIMON SAYS... GIVE ME A THRILL!
Very good so far. Very sweet interactions and moments. One thing i would critique about this chapter is to also let us see things from simons perspective too. The intimate moment between the two only had 50% of its potential because we didnt know how things were from simons perspective.
Like what its like for him inside Beck. How it feels, what he thinks and is doing. Maybe a chapter dedicated to his perspective on everything? :) loving the story so far.
Author's Response:
Hi friend! Thanks for leaving a few notes. Stick around: you might just get everything you want and more.
Not immediately but... soon.
This story's still got miles of road left to tread!